Today I’m pleased to be part of Jennifer Ellis’s blog tour for the first in her series The Derivatives of Displacement. I received a kindle copy of A Pair of Docks free in return for my honest review.
A Pair of Docks
by Jennifer Ellis
Available in paperback or ebook, 300 pages
Published 9th December 2013
ISBN 0992153808 (9780992153809)
Fourteen-year-old Abbey Sinclair likes to spend her afternoons in the physics lab learning about momentum and gravitational pull. But her practical scientific mind is put to the test when her older brother, Simon, discovers a mysterious path of stones that allows them, along with Abbey’s twin, Caleb, to travel back and forth between their world and what appears to be…the future. Unfortunately, they’re not the only ones who know about the stones, and they soon realize their lives are in danger from a man known only as Mantis. Abbey, Caleb, and Simon must follow a twisting trail of clues that will lead them from their autistic neighbor, Mark, to a strange professor who claims to know the rules of the stones, and to multiple futures—some of whose inhabitants don’t want to stay put.
Sometimes when I’m reading I am torn between what I think and what would my 14 year-old self think. This is one of those books. My adult self is pleased to find a book that is full of both correct and well-imagined science, an enthusiastic young female scientist, and a great and unusual adventure. My adult self also cringes at what feels like overdone description, especially in the early time hops, some characters that feel too extreme, and wondering how 12 year olds will react to Mark, who plays an important role and is delightfully displayed with all his autistic quirks and fixations. I think my 14 year-old self will be wrapped up in the book, irritated by too much detail, but identify with Abbey for most of the time. Simon and Caleb, her brothers, are cool and well characterised, her mum and dad are largely absent due to her mum fighting an election campaign (there’s a twist on the absent parent syndrome) – so absent that when her mum referred to Peter I had no idea she meant her husband for a few paragraphs.
The detail involved in the descriptions of the first two time travel trips irritated me since it left little room for the imagination, although to me the ‘where’ was obvious. Funnily enough, the second one was eerily like the first book I wrote, which is discarded in the mists of time (the method of entry, the skin in the bubble, the maze, the strangeness). It was a little like deja vu. That was the only likeness though. I loved the whole premise of the stones until it came to the witchcraft element, which I felt jarred with the scientific aspect of Abbey’s story. I can see that the author is building this up for the next in the series, but I would rather she had found another way of dealing with the gathering conflict than falling back on the trope of destiny and birthright. However the excitement of the adventure, the originality of the time travel methods, and the twists and turns involving different timelines as well as mysterious characters makes the story fascinating and compelling.
I think this book will find a big audience among boys and girls who enjoy science and want a bright hero or heroine – years ahead of her class but still coping in a regular school. It will also find an audience among the many adults who enjoy clean time travel books, not least because of the mystery and misdirection involved with some of the terminology. I wish the author hadn’t named one company Sinclair Systems (which I associated with my ZX Spectrum) and the mother Mrs Beckham, but that’s just me.
I’m struggling to decide whether this book is good or great. Since I’m not sure, it’ll have to get 4 stars rather than 5.
About the Author
Jennifer Ellis is the author of A Pair of Docks, and In the Shadows of the Mosquito Constellation (forthcoming). She writes contemporary action-adventure fiction with a dystopic edge for both adults and children. She lives in a small ski town in Canada with her husband and two boys where she skis, does ballet, cooks, joins too many book clubs and works as environmental researcher. She blogs randomly but regularly at http://www.jenniferellis.ca and can be found on Twitter at @jenniferlellis. A Pair of Docks can be purchased on Amazon.com at: http://amzn.to/1aytTKD
16 thoughts on “Book Review: A Pair of Docks by Jennifer Ellis”
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Very thorough, as usual, Jemima. Great job.
The cover looks brilliant too.
It is – very good cover 🙂
Great review, as always, Jemima! I know what you mean about the struggle between what a kid would think and what I think. I have trouble resurrecting that 14-year-old self who read Louis L’Amour uncritically. . . .
lol ! But then I remember a series starting with the Tarnsmen of Gor for YA that I was thrilled with – until I realised how boring they had become!
This was a great review Jemima. I think we can all benefit from putting ourselves back in our 14year old shoes when reading books like this. I loved what you pointed out and what you liked etc. Thanks again for joining us on the Kid Lit Blog HOp
Thanks, Julie! Hope all is well with you now 🙂
Awesome review Jemima. I think I enjoyed reading the review more than wanting to read the book that you reviewed :)) I enjoy your reviews more so because you write from a writer’s perspective too.
Thanks for joining us on the KidLit BlogHop!
-Reshama @ Stackingbooks
Thanks, Reshama! There’s a review most Saturdays – sometimes kidlit, and often fantasy or crime 😉
Nice review, Jemima. I sometimes have the same problems when I read MG/YA novels. However, I’ve always had such an eclectic taste in books that I probably would really enjoy this. Thanks for sharing Jemima.
I’m sure you would enjoy it!
You sound very conflicted about this book. The YA genre is tricky because the books really are geared toward capturing teens, and our adult minds think completely differently. I imagine it’s difficult for an adult to write for this age group. You’ve given the author good feedback though so hopefully she’ll think about it and improve Book 2. It does sound like a good premise though. Jemima, you should really be a beta reader! 😉
Thanks for sharing your thoughts in the Kid Lit Blog Hop
Yes, I’ve been thinking about that difference recently. But I enjoyed the book!
I just got around to reading some of the comments regarding your review of my book. I wanted to say thanks again for reviewing A Pair of Docks and providing such thoughtful constructive feedback. I will definitely be taking your thoughts into consideration for book two.
Thanks, Jennifer. Renee’s comments are especially interesting. Just remember to place most weight on comments by your target audience 🙂
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