Zanzibar’s Rings. It was my aim from day one of this year’s A to Z Challenge to finish writing the third book in my Viridian system series. So, what’s the score? I suppose in theory I have until the end of today, but I did start at 18,650 words, so …

Zanzibar’s Rings – the Word Count

The good news is: I got to my Camp NaNoWriMo target yesterday. 81, 879 for a target of 80,000. Here’s the evidence. You can see the bar for yesterday is above the last point which is the target for today.

I have every confidence that I’ll finish the draft today. I have a final chapter to write, rounding up various odds and ends, then a postscript which is an edited short story. Together they’ll throw in at least another 5000 words, putting me well over my 85k target.

Zanzibar’s Rings – the new blurb

I put the original blurb on my A post, so you knew roughly what the book was about. As I read it again, about a week into the month, I realised that the incident which kicks off all the changes in the Viridian System means that nobody can communicate with other people in the galaxy–so how were these two superpowers supposed to even travel there, let alone wage war with each other?

But these things tend to go around in circles, and I found myself with a role for at least one of the Galactic Powers. So here’s a redrafted blurb…

A Galactic crisis: the entire comms system destroyed. No waypoints, no navigation aids, no database access… and how will spaceships in flight get home–or to any destination? Dolores is stuck in warp with a very dangerous passenger, Pete gets his shuttle back home on manual. But how come anything in close contact with pure orichalcum fixes itself? Just flying through Zanzibar’s Rings solves the problem–as the Federation’s fighters find, as they descend on the Viridian System to take possession of the planets.

Zanzibar’s Rings by Jemima Pett, expected 22 Feb 2022
Zanzibar's rings draft cover
Draft cover

What next…

As I said in yesterdays’ post, I’ll be working on bringing this draft through to publication standard, with a view to launching in February next year. I thought the 22nd February might be a nice date. In English format, that’s 22-02-2022. I’ve had several palindromic wordcounts that I’ve posted through the month, so it seems fitting 🙂

With that in mind, I’ve registered the ebook as a pre-order with Amazon, iTunes, B&N and Kobobooks. The date might change, though.

But what am I writing next? What novel will take over from the Viridian System and the Princelings series? I might work on my Second Sector Emergency Rescue Service scifi story (AAA for galactic drivers), or I might finally get around to the modern-day Black Beauty I’ve been thinking about for twelve years!

AtoZ Road Trip

I’ve been so busy writing, I haven’t done much visiting at all. I intend to make up for that over the next few months. Thank you for visiting, for your support and encouraging comments, and I hope you had a good April.

Reflections post next Wednesday, along with IWSG, Camp NaNo round-up and maybe writephoto as well! 🙂

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14 thoughts on “Zanzibar’s Rings (Viridian System 3) #AtoZChallenge2021

  • 30 April, 2021 at 10:50 am

    Congratulations on reaching – even exceeding – your target!

    • 30 April, 2021 at 6:35 pm

      Thanks, Mary. I think finishing is the hardest bit – and I know I’ve missed a scene out!

  • 30 April, 2021 at 3:19 pm

    You tackled a lot this month, and have pulled it off! I’m impressed 🙂

  • 30 April, 2021 at 6:09 pm

    Cheering you on – congrats on your impressive accomplishment! And best wishes for both the finishing and the future.

    • 30 April, 2021 at 6:37 pm

      Thanks, Deborah, that’s very kind of you 🙂
      Best wishes to you too.

  • 30 April, 2021 at 11:32 pm

    Congrats on a strong finish! That is awesome! I like your chosen release date, that makes it more fun for sure. I am excited to read your work!

    • 1 May, 2021 at 2:29 pm

      When I realised the date, I couldn’t resist it. Funnily enough I posted on the Viridian website ( that I’d started writing it on the 22nd Feb this year.

  • 1 May, 2021 at 1:54 pm

    Congratulations Jemima – you have been quietly grafting … and yes -20-02- 2022 sounds a fun date … all the best with everything coming together – cheers Hilary

  • 4 May, 2021 at 2:31 pm

    Congrats on finishing! You took on a lot and completed everything in style, kudos!


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