A camel train… I saw this and thought of a Carruthers tale I did some years ago, but it’s now in my Greed and Retribution collection of Unexpected Twisty Tales. Click the title to buy it! [this post will autodestruct in one month]

Apologies to KL Caley and New2Writing.com, but a flashback to that WEP post is my offering today, as I’m having trouble typing. Not sure whether it’s RSI or arthritis (or one caused by the other). Need to limit keyboard time, anyway. Even for camel stories!

camel train
 a long camel train heading to a fort surrounded by desert sands

The Jewel Box and the camel train

“You can’t steal Queen Athopshetra’s jewel box!”

“Why not? She stole it from me in the first place.”

Carruthers glowered into his wine cup while Henry stared at him. The old resentment had welled up as he bowed at the woman on her golden throne, jewel box on a footstool beside her. He detested the sight of her, the triple chins barely contained by the solid gold torque, the white paste make-up covering what must be deep lines by now.

It hadn’t been so much as a flood as a trickle. He’d barely recognised her, then he’d seen through the mask with horror. Her treachery had hammered at the back of his brain until it had broken through, washing his mind of the present. He almost staggered as he relived the ancient tomb. An old wound in his shoulder throbbed. All because of this woman—this witch.

“I’m going to take it back.” he repeated. “Are you with me?” He lifted his head to his accomplice in many adventures, challenging him for another effort.

Henry quailed. “I don’t know, C. It’s just… Queen Athopshetra… I mean…”

Carruthers shrugged. “She’s just a woman. It’s just a palace. It’s probably not as secure as some of the tombs.”

“Maybe not with secret traps, but live guards…”

“Guards for hire, not natives who give their lives for their gods. There’ll be someone willing to look the other way. This needs research, though. All to be done by tomorrow night.”

“Tomorrow night?”

“We can hardly stay longer.”


Several hours later, Carruthers returned to their room, shrugged off his burnous, and pulled off his boots. He gazed at his sleeping companion, considering what he had learned while exploring the palace.

Strangely, none of the treasures displayed in the throne room had any overt protection. Why?

Would nobody dare steal from the queen? Her subjects would not, but few of her subjects would know what treasures were there, let alone know what to do with them. Pass them to people like Carruthers, possibly. Traders, passing through, overnighting at the city, would be searched routinely. Every gate was guarded. Any trader worth his salt would make sure not all their goods were taxed, they would have hiding places. He and Henry travelled too light to have hiding places.

He parked an idea and thought on.

The objects on display might not be the real thing. Copies, to give a great display—especially of past gifts. The real thing would be in the palace vaults. More secure, but a vault was home territory to Carruthers; he’d been breaking into them all his life.

But that jewel box was an exceedingly good copy, if it was a copy. And the queen liked real treasures around her. Desired them. Gloated over them.

Was the protection very subtle? He had detected nothing that would provide protection. No secret beams of light, soft stone pavements, wispy threads to trap burglars. Unless there was some severely modern technology hidden away, this type of building simply couldn’t set these things once the room was empty. You could not turn a pressure panel on and off like a gas-lamp.

Carruthers lived by questioning the obvious. If this queen could turn security traps on and off at will, what sort of technology would that be, and how could he track it down and disable it?

He stood up, pulled his burnous on again, but left his boots where they lay.


Henry caught up with Carruthers at lunch next day.

“I say, old chap, where have you been all morning?”

“Just chatting with the traders. I found one going our way. Persuaded him to let us join them.”

“Oh, good. No risk of us getting lost on this bit.”

“Exactly my thought.”

Carruthers slept well after lunch, in readiness for their overnight journey. He ensured his animals were properly loaded up, timing it to arrive at the gate just after the guards finished checking the caravan.

“Just the same as we came in. Yes, this box contains perishable food, those are the waterskins, those contain wine.”

A blare of trumpets split the air. Shouting came from the palace. The guards pointed their rifles at Carruthers and Henry. “Wait here!”

“We’ll wait, certainly.” Carruthers got back on his horse, and leant on the pommel.

“What’s going on?” Henry asked.

“No idea, but you know we always do what we’re told in this sort of situation.”

The guards returned, waving Carruthers off his horse with their rifles.

“Yes, of course, no problem, you don’t need to prod me. What is it? This box, yes food, look.” Carruthers opened a brown box, and showed the guards the fruits and dates inside. He shut it up again and showed him the other containers, and unpacked his nightroll to show it was also empty. Another guard went through Henry’s things in the same way.

When they were done, the guards escorted them through the gate, then hared up to the head of the camel train, already strung out on the road to Aqaba.

Henry looked up to the guards ahead. “What are they looking for?”

“No idea. Must be something missing from the palace, I suppose.”

Sounds of arguing drifted back.

“Looks like they’ve found something,” Carruthers observed. The guards had hauled a man from a camel, and were dragging him, together with a sack containing something heavy, back towards the city.

“Doesn’t do to steal from Queen Athopshetra,” he commented.

“I wonder what he stole?” Henry watched as the reprobate was hauled unceremoniously through the gate.

“I have no idea.” Carruthers smiled, resisting the urge to look at his fruit box, exactly the same dimensions as the queen’s jewel box, carefully covered in a tight-fitting layer of oiled paper, inside and out, and dropped in the dirt a couple of times for further camouflage.

He gazed ahead, as the caravan set off again. He’d keep his secret safe until they were well away from all these adventurers.

© J M Pett 2019


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6 thoughts on “Camel | #writephoto Flash Fiction

  • 20 February, 2023 at 4:05 pm

    Oooh! Carruthers ! Very neat ….loved it 💜💜

  • 21 February, 2023 at 10:29 pm

    I like that Carruthers is successful at the end here. This story makes me want to set off on an adventure of my own!

  • 24 February, 2023 at 11:22 am

    Oh fantastic. I’ve just purchased Unexpected Twisty Tales too. KL <3

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